LA MIA
(A Poem Of Love)
The sky was blue
Not a single cloud was there
Not a single one grey
I was walking down the fields
Just thinking of you
Just thinking of you.
I wanted to see you
So I decided to be at your place
before the noon.
As I was walking down the fields
I met a beautiful rose
Whom I thought would be
Perfect for you.
But as I touched the petals
The rose squeaked out
In her musical voice
‘ O Great Being! You shall leave me
As I’m nothing in use to you
I have more thorns then the red petals.
You shall take the golden fruit
For it will satisfy your love
And is more beautiful than me.
But you shall for your sweetest
Take a rose kiss from me
As my tribute to her
She will be more rosy, forever, for you.’
The sky was blue
Not a single cloud was there
Not a single one grey
I was walking down the fields
Just thinking of you
Just thinking of you.
I went to the Golden fruit
No doubt the fruit was beautiful
Brighter than the sun.
It was the only one
To exist on the land of humans
So bright, so gold-ish, perfect for her.
But as I touched the Golden fruit
He, in his deep voice,
‘ O! Lover! O!
What I’m use to you
I am just a hard fruit
And the hardest of all.
Your love can never have me
And in some days I’ll be rotten
And ugly forever.
But you shall for your love
Have a golden kiss from me.
As a tribute to her
For she will never feel weak.
You shall forever be with her
To protect her.
As now, you must go to the angel
The whitest of all, who created me.’
The sky was blue
Not a single cloud was there
Not a single one grey
I was walking down the fields
Just thinking of you
Just thinking of you.
The noon was coming closer
So I was thrilled
And I hurried to the angel
The whitest of all, as golden fruit told me.
The angel was sitting on tree
The whitest of all, purely white.
She had the two white wings
And a golden ring upon her head.
I approached to her, and told my thrill
And in her sweet voice, she said
‘ O Great Lover! O Great Love!
You shall not take me
For I am just an angel who
Can create the mortal things.
But love is immortal, and i have no such power
To create it and serve it and protect it.
Love is greatest and Love is fullest
If is unconditional
If is deepest
If is highest
If is widest
If is longest
And if it is true, it will be immortal.
And is the only immortal thing
Which is loveliest and not greedy
And not selfish and has no devilish power
And has the power to teach a beast to love.
Yes sir, Love is loveliest!
But you shall take an angel kiss from me
For you love as she is most beautiful
more whiter more sweet.
She’s great!! For she has the power of love
As there are no angels in heaven too
Who, has the power of love.’
With a deep sigh, I left the angel
And walked till the end of fields
Where was your place.
As I was walking, as I thought
For what I shall bring the precious
For you.
But then I remembered what
Just the angel has said to me
And I thought, my love for you
Can’t be express with the mortal thing.
It’s forever, immortal through out inside me,
I’m your guard, you’re my hope
You’re my inspiration, you’re the only,
Which I can and have, for I love you
Till I die.
But after death, I will love you in heaven too
And before if this world ends,
All other faces their end,
My love, for you, will still be there,
Shining like a star, red and bright, full of love
For you.
And before the noon
I reached your place
You were there, waiting for me at the door.
I saw you, you saw me.
I hold your hand, You smiled and blushed.
I saw your blue eyes, very dear to me
Which were more bright then above blue sky
More adorable than any other
More precious than the diamonds.
I kiss your hand, the golden kiss
For you’ll always have the strength, beside me.
I kissed your cheek, the rose kiss
For you’ll be rosy forever.
I kiss your forehead, the angel kiss
For we can keep our love immortal
And my hope you’ll always love me.
And last was kiss, on your sweet lips
For it was mine, a tribute to you for
You love me and for I love you
More than any other,
And for I’ll love you, for ever
No matter what happens,
The kiss of Love.
It is a lovely poem Thank you for this.
Ranu
I should thank you for reading my poem…
I’m very impressed with this poem. It has some very interesting ideas and thoughts on love. I also like the imagery, such as the meeting with the angel, and I like that the poem tells a story.
I’m curious about certain parts. You say there was not a single cloud, but then you say “not a single one grey,” as if there are clouds of other colours in the sky. I like it because it makes me think, but I’m wondering what it meant for you. I also want to know more about the rose and the fruit. The person wants the rose, but the rose says that it has more thorns than petals. Is that because the rose is a “mortal thing” that doesn’t last, or is it a warning that the person might be hurt by his love?
I like the poem. It seems to have a lot of meaning.
Thanks Dan, thanks for reading my poem… 🙂
No Dan, there were just no clouds, it’s just a irony you can say that ” not a single cloud, not a single one grey” it’s just my way of representing that sky was clear and blue and the day would be just fine and not gloomy.
Exactly, rose is a mortal thing, it will never last and after all it has thorns which might just hurt someone. Love, can never be expressed through mortal or imaginary things like angels and et cetera. Love is between two beautiful people, its an understanding, sharing, compromising, and if love is based on these things, I don’t see a point of all mortal things interfering between the two lovers. I understand that you have to express your love for someone through giving them gifts and other things but my main idea was that it should not be like, “he didn’t gave me a box of chocolates on valentine’s day, so e does not love me”, but it is not necessary. This is not love. Love is to understand each other.
An exceptionally beautiful poem.
Thanks Sofia 🙂
You are welcome 🙂
Magnificently written.
Thank You 🙂